My errors

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My errors - AWL sentences -

In class of three days, I had many mistakes.
For example, 
Rick's Research Writing Blog, https://rickresearchwriting.wordpress.com/

From the Above mistakes, I can prevent these things if I take care. 

If do you want to check the mistake, I recommend us the website "Rick's Research Writing Blog".
Please check it and take care of your mistake.
 

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